| Hi guys this week we have been working on persuasive writing and here´s mine! |
Thursday, 1 August 2019
Should people USE ANIMALS!!!!
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2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
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Dear Letitia-ann
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you put time order words in your story and how you stated your opinion.
I like how you added color to your post.
next time maybe you could add a little bit more description about what you had been working on.
From Amber
Hi Letitia-Ann,it's me Eunize from Wigram School.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added 2 good reasons why you think it depends on using animals, also I like the way you added 1 linking word. At my old school we also learnt how to write a persuasive writing. Did you know that you could of added a third reason to your writing.Did anyone helped you make this great piece of writing!
Great job Letitia-Ann!!!
Hi Letitia-ann!
ReplyDeleteIt's me Amelia! I really liked your post because you added in for example which made your reasons stronger. Next time maybe you can reread and make sure the spelling is right and your writing makes sense. I have also done a post about this. Maybe you can check out my blog. I was wondering if you've met an animal that gets worked.