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Monday, 16 September 2019

Dog Beach

Hi this week in writing we did our writing tests and put them on a google drawing so here is mine bye.





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  1. amelia25 October 2019 at 09:27

    Hi Letitia -ann,
    It's Amelia. I really like the description you used, and the pictures as well. I like the colors of the title and the background. Next time you could write a little more about the scene and what was there. How many dogs were there? Reread the story and make sure it all adds up. I remember doing this test. It was quite fun.
    -Amelia

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